(rough draft)poverty essay plz rate 1-6 I think it sux need so much help

College Essays
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<p>6=highest</p>

<p>For now I have just finished a rough draft(haven’t even looked at it since last weekend), but I plan on finishing it this weekend so if I could get some tips in advance that would speed up the process.</p>

<p>I’ll PM if I think you are worthy.</p>

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<p>Worthy? I hope that your essay is a little more humble…I’ll be happy to look at it if you want to PM me…</p>

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<p>I look sort of untrustable with my miniscule post count, but if you want, I’ll take a look. I’m a senior in high school so I’m not exactly an expert, but I’ll give you any feedback I’ve got, if you want.</p>

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<p>hpg, I think he meant that he will send it to whoever’s trustable, not worthy of reading his “superior” essay.</p>