<p>What aspects of Santa Clara make it your top choice?</p>
<p>Santa Clara University (SCU) is one of my top choices because I would like to attend the Leavey School of Business. It is my goal to eventually own a locally conscious and profitable business. To that end, while in high school I have volunteered at Jack’s Helping Hand, a non-profit organization that helps special needs children. I am involved in many of the office functions, such as bookkeeping, filing, and communicating with clients and donors. These small tasks are neccessary to keep a non-profit organization in business.
Volunteering at a non-profit organization helped me to realize the importance of helping others. I plan to continue doing community service while in college. However, by majoring in business I can make even greater contributions to my community.</p>
<p>Is my answer to vague or not specific enough?</p>