<p>So I finished my supplemental essay for Sarah Lawrence. I choose the second option: </p>
<p>We assume that you have changed throughout your high school years, and we are curious to hear what experiences and challenges in the past four years have influenced who you have become. We are also interested in how these changes have led you to apply to Sarah Lawrence College. What is it about the college and its unique educational structure that leads you to think that you will be a good fit? How will the college help you fulfill your goals? (250-500 word)</p>
<p>Could anyone please revise it grammatically? I also want some feedback on what you guys think…</p>
<p>Thanks</p>