SAT Essay, please grade! :-(

<p>Timed essay and copied word for word from paper. + Bad handwriting
Q: What is your view on the idea that it takes failure to achieve success.</p>

<pre><code> The process of learning and achieving greater success is truly improbable without failures along the way, One must learn from his mistakes and failures to achieve a greater understanding, and ultimately success. A world lacking of failure is a word so called an Utopia, a world that is monotonous and stagnant. The greater success that can be engendered through the so called “failures” is evident in history. One of which is the history of physics, a teaching that has allowed us to achieve a greater comprehension of our universe. Understanding that has never been achieved in the past, because it was the past successes and failures that allows the scientific community today to be able to do extraordinary things.

   The radio was invented in 1921, but such an invention is not the sole work of one man, but countless physicist in the past who have failed at the same task repeatedly until acquiring a useful result. Physicists such as nikola tesla who studied radio waves worked many years to gain a understanding of wave characteristics. It would be absurd to claim that he had not made any mistakes min his career, but it was his assiduous nature that gave him unyielding resolve to learn from his failures. His work, along with the work of countless physicists, established the foundation for a greater understanding of waves and paved way for future physicists to continue their work.


  The Fast food industry today is both a blessing and a curse, creating millions of jobs across the globe but also rapidly increasing the obesity rate amongsts americans. The paragon of the fastfood industry, mcdonalds, though it is an extremely successful coorporation today-extending from north america to asia, it has had its share of failure in the past. mcdonalds founders, Maurice and Ronald mcdonal, founded the mcdonalds corporation but lacked the marketing genius of the cooporations succesor, Ray kro, to propell mcdonalds to its full potential. Ray Kroc was a visionary, a great entreprenuer. However, he too was not perfect; By learning from his own failures and the mistakes of mcdonald corps predecessors, he created a behemoth cooporation that would eventually come to define the culture of an entire nation. 


  Whether its the success of an individual, a group, or even a billion dollar industry, their modern success is preceded by years of trial and error-years of sometimes tears and bankruptcy. But it is their everlasting determination to overcome their failures and obstacles that would ultimately bring them glory.

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<p>“One must learn from his mistakes and failures to achieve a greater understanding, and ultimately success”</p>

<p>His or her…</p>

<p>7-8/12</p>

<p>Grade mine please.</p>

<p>Actually, that sentence is grammatically correct.
Thanks for the grade!</p>

<p>Bumpin up this thread naaaaaaa mean.</p>

<p>a 10/12.
It shows a reasonably clear understanding of the prompt, display strong critical thinking skills, relevant examples, logical ideas, competent use of language, somewhat varied sentence structure and appropriate vocabulary.</p>

<p>Yo. Bump. loljh</p>