Sat essay

<p>Assignment ; should people take their own decisions and rely les on advice of experts ?
An advice or consult from an expert can illuminate an individual’s path. Because it is hard nearly impossible for an individual to be acquainted with many perspectives about copious matters , getting an advice from an expert can help the individual to prudently and consciously choose a decision .|An advice from an expert on a specialized branch enhances one’s perspectives , knowledge , and opportunities . Although some people would argue that an expert is no more intelligent or adroit than a ordinary person , consultants in any specific branch can provide salutary advices that an unacquainted person doesn’t possess.</p>

<p>An expert knows the advantages,disadvantages,and consequences of a specific subject ; therefore, an expert’s advice can be so effectual in such cases. During the last few years , genetically modified crops have created so much controversial debate about its publication . Some people endorsed their conviction that modified crops offer a copious harvest without a lot of resources without harming the environment with toxic substances ; on the other hand , others accentuated that genetically modified crops on a broad extent can be virulent to a human’s body and to the nature stability . One day the media held a debate to know the citizen opinions ; most ordinary farmers claimed that genetically modified crops offer crops with ideal characterization in a short period of time with less effort , but specialists in growing crops replied that the accumulation of the substances used in genetically modified crops in a human body can invade the immunity system as well as absorb nonrenewable minerals from the soil. they provides plausible evidences and observation that verified their viewpoint . Because they were the experts in that branch , the government endorsed their observations and band the usage of genetically modified crops.</p>

<p>"An advice from a trustworthy expert can have a strong effect on a life " said Mr. Janklin. In the short story written by Haung han , an 17 - years old student Jaun was able to improve her artistic ability by getting advises from her professor .
Jaun was a girl who obsessed with painting , but unfortunately she wasn’t satisfied with her work . One day she decided to consult her art professor to gain some expertise in order to improve herself. Consequently the professor taught her how to add a sense of creativity , artistry , and innovation into her portraits and painting ; moreover, he entered her a new world by showing her how to put her emotions and thought into the sketches she drew. Within two months , Jaun was able to incredibly improve herself that she was elected as the most talented prodigious artist at her school .</p>

<p>An advice has a special magic that enhances an individual to explore a new way or a road that wasn’t obvious before.
Getting advice doesn’t belittle any person on the other hand an individual more illuminated , skillful, and discriminate.</p>

<p>I wrote this essay in time and would like to know its weakness points in order to improve .
I would also like to know a score a comment on it please.</p>

<p>This is a really well developed and coherent essay. I’d even say that this essay is more than enough in SAT terms. I had the same prompt when I took the test in January. Mine wasn’t as lengthy and eloquent as yours and I got a 9/12. </p>