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<p>This is the first essay I’ve ever written- please grade it! </p>

<p>Do people accomplish more when they are allowed to do things their way?</p>

<p>I usually find myself being the most productive when I have a passion for my task. Passion drives me to accomplish the most from my task. By being allowed to do things your way you get motivated to complete the task to the best of your abilities.
I am currently environment officer at my school and since I am in charge of organizing events and activities to raise awareness about global warming and the environment around us, I am able to adapt the task to suit my needs. I work at the time when I’m most productive and the freedom to finish the task in my own style allows me to make sure that I’m not forcing myself to do something I am not passionate about.Passion is the key to accomplishing more. Every time I have to take part in a debate I find myself being much more persuasive when I care about the topic being debated on and this allows me to be a better public speaker and improve my debating skills.</p>

<p>however, too much freedom can lead to unproductively. Usually when I’m given homework without any set guidelines I find myself procrastinating to the point where I’m forced to do my homework at the last minute. This leads to my work not being up to its best standard. Also, while working in a team it is hard to accomplish more when you are allowed to do things your way. This is because the key to teamwork is working together and adapting to everyone’s needs.most people have vary varied styles of work. Therefore, if you decide to work in a way that suits you, it might not bring the best out of another member of your team as they might not feel comfortable with your style of work. Therefore, it is important to take into consideration that while working in a team, you need to adapt to suit everyone’s needs and not work in a manner that suits you best.</p>

<p>I do believe that people are able to accomplish more when theyare allows to do things their way but I believe that </p>

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<p>I’d give it a 2/6. Try to add some examples from outside your experience (history, literature, etc.). The grammar needs a lot of work. No offense, but the conclusion is one of the worst sentences I’ve seen in a long time. You need to either find someone with experience to help you or do your own research on how to write a good SAT essay.</p>

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<p>same, a 2/6. you lack examples from history, literature, current events or any other relevent one. and also, i find that your essay is a bit misleading. like you are supposed to take a side and write only on the side you choose. like CHD2013 said, you should look on websites or a person to help you</p>