scholarship essay. takers?

<p>Hi, I have a scholarship essay (450 words-ish) that I will need to submit sometime soon. Anyone want to look over it? It's a recycled essay, but definitely not your generic prompt-answering response. :p</p>

<p>If you still need have time, I'll take a look.</p>

<p>May I take a look? I will try to give you some feedback however I am also trying to learn since English is not my best subject.</p>