Scholarship Essay

<p>Hey I've written an essay for a scholarship, is anyone willing to read it and tell me their thoughts? I'm not really worried about grammar and such, just a general feeling you get from the essay.</p>

<p>In exchange, I'll read your essay and help you out.</p>

<p>I'll be glad to read it. Send it by PM if you wish.
Also, any thoughts on what it means on a scholarship app when it asks for a "Short personal statement/autobiography"? My son has written one paragraph in the tone of "I was born in Texas and I like to fish". OK, not quite, but close.</p>

<p>Pm me. I will read it</p>

<p>I'd love to give it a look.</p>