Score my SAT essay please?

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<p>Could you guys score my SAT essay? I got a 6 from The Princeton Review. It’s from one of their diagnostic tests and after I scored it using their student tools they gave me a terrible 6. I think mine deserves at least an 8. I got a 11 on my previous test essay which was a pleasant surprise but I normally get 9’s. But I have NEVER gotten a 6! This is the 1st time and the timing is horrible because the real SAT is in 2 days! My confidence has been totally destroyed. Please tell me what you’d grade it.</p>

<p>On the topic of censorship, Supreme Court Justice William Brennan wrote that “the Government may not prohibit the expression of an idea simply because society finds the idea itself offensive or disagreeable.” However, John Wheeler, Chairman of the Vietnam Veterans Memorial Committee, has said, “Vietnam was the first war ever fought without any censorship. Without censorship, things can get terribly confused in the public mind.”</p>

<p>Assignment: Is censorship always a bad thing? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.</p>

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<p>By the way, here’s The Princeton Review’s feedback:
You have put in good effort! However, more details are needed in the stated examples. Also, make sure to tie the examples clearly to the prompt. Good luck.
Additional Feedback:
Write more neatly.
Clean up the overall appearance of your essay.</p>

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<p>Bump</p>

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<p>dont worry! you got high scores before so you obviously know some good sentence structures and vocabulary. I would think that that topic was a rare case where you couldnt think of anything, or most likely, because of the hundreds of essays recieved, they run it through a computer to look for grammer structure, and words etc. dont worry, its not the actual sat graders, so they will grave differently. dont change your writing style</p>

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<p>Lol did you read it? Would you give it a 6 too? @collegecaps</p>

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<p>i just read your essay, and it was well thought out, 100 percent not a 6!!! to sat standards, that is above average. I would give it a 9-10</p>

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<p>grade my essay too please if you have time !!!</p>

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<p>Aw thanks man! I was totally worried for a second there. Hopefully other people say the same thing! @collegecaps</p>

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<p>Sure bro. I’ll grade it @collegecaps</p>