<p>Hi guys, don’t worry I’m not asking anyone to critique my essay! 
I sent in my ED app a couple weeks ago and still am uncomfortable about my essay. I spent weeks working on the “influential person” one about someone I love dearly whose role in my life has been pretty unconventional. I just feel bad because I worry that I talked more about how she helped me than explicitly talking about my attributes. Granted I explained how she has helped me become the person I am today and I linked it to my love for writing, but I really hope that it won’t break my app T____T It’s a well crafted essay for sure, but I heard that LAC look more closely at your essays than universities and such. :(</p>