Seeking help with college applications

Im applying to most UCs and about 4 CSUs. I need help just knowing if I’m doing everything correctly or if there’s something I can do to make it better. I would like to get my feedback before Saturday November 29th. The prompt of my essay is growing up in a competitive dance world and the dark side. I have not worked with a CC reader

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