Sending apps next week- need someone to edit my essay!

College Essays
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<p>The main thing I’m worried about is if my essay paints a sufficient picture of myself. So please answer these:</p>

<ul>
<li>Does my essay create a picture in your head?</li>
<li>Are there any tense mistakes (please fix)</li>
<li>Are there any grammar mistakes (please fix)</li>
<li>Did I include enough details?</li>
<li>Is there a focus?</li>
</ul>

<p>I’ll PM you! I’m a B average student so I need tons of feedback! Feel free to be blunt or change up my ideas.</p>

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<p>I am having the same problem as you! would you read and edit my essay, and I’ll read and edit yours?</p>

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<p>I’m in the same boat as you, but I’ll review yours if you’d like. In return, if you could answer the post I just made about Traditional or Non-traditional college essays, that’d be lovely!</p>

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<p>Hey, I’d be glad to edit your essay. Just PM me your essay.</p>