<p>Hi, my dream school is Columbia University, but my parents absolutlely refused to allow me to apply early decision to Columbia, so instead I applied early action to Yale. I was deferred. It sucked. I am now using one of my Yale essays to send in to Columbia because I know that it is unique. I just need someone to help me edit it more, becuase I can’t make any mistakes on my Columbia app! I am pretty terrified of not getting in. My essay is about growing up half Chinese/ half Pakistani. Is there any one that would like to help?</p>
<p>I’ll be staying up for a while to finish my Michigan application.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look.</p>