does this sentence make sense?:
“Last summer, in addition to working at my job, I worked out and ran at my local fitness center.”
<p>It makes sense, but it’s a bit confusing</p>
<p>how can i fix it?!
make it less confusing
help
thanks</p>
<p>it doesn’t have a really smooth flow, but I’m not sure how to fix it</p>
<p>‘working at my job’ is a bit redundant. What else would you do at your job? Play? </p>
<p>Try this:</p>
<p>Last summer, in addition to working, I exercized at my local fitness center.</p>
<p>I’d say “In addition to working, I continued off-season training for (insert your sport here)”.</p>
<p>Or you could go the extra mile and actually say what your job is. Details!</p>
<p>worked out = ran, unless you did push up as well, but that’s not important.</p>