<p>The opportunity to learn from the best and brightest in their respective fields will implement a terrific foundation for my future endeavors.</p>
<p>Does that sentence make sense?</p>
<p>I just want to make sure theres no errors because something sounds wrong. Maybe I am just looking to deeply into it.</p>
<p>Also if any1 can read my why columbia thing and give me some feedback i would appreciate it. Thanks</p>
<p>implement a terrific foundation for my future endeavors</p>
<p>sounds funny because it suffers from Thesaurus vocab as opposed to natural language:</p>
<p>I am eager to learn from the best and the brightest in the fields that interest me, such as X. Y and Z.</p>
<p>Be clear, be specific, use the appropriate word not the “fanciest” one.</p>
<p>yeah your right I guess im trying to hard to use “thesaurus” words.</p>
<p>Is the sentence grammatically correct?</p>
<p>I’m not so sure you can “implement a foundation”. Provide a foundation
would be better.</p>
<p>grammatically its right, but pye is right. find a better word.</p>
<p>Yeah you really can’t implement a foundation. I think if you change it to provide it will sound better, and slightly less thesaurusy.</p>
<p>thanks guys, you all are very helpful</p>