Hey guys,
I’m not going to pretend that I haven’t accomplished much in high school. However, I do think I may be ‘spread a little too thin’ for the top schools, as my ECs do jump around a lot. I’m trying to really cut down on my college list (I don’t want to apply to more than 12 schools, with 2 being safeties) so please let me know which (if any) I should stop considering now, and also which are reaches/matches. Thanks!
SCHOOLS
Early Action: Princeton, UVA (99% sure I am going this route)
Regular Decision (in order of preference): Harvard, Penn, Yale, Columbia, Northwestern, Georgetown, Dartmouth, Johns Hopkins, Vanderbilt; not including safeties
White upper-middle class male (not applying for FA) with no hooks (except my dad went to Columbia for business school). Dad has an MBA and mom grew up in Europe, never went to college. Attends a private high school in PA.
ACADEMICS
GPA: 3.98 out of 4.0 (unweighted) | 4.3 out of 4.6 (weighted)
SAT (old, took twice): 2290 (740 CR, 750 M, 800 WR, Essay 11)
First time: 2200 (720 CR, 680 M, 800 WR, Essay 10)
Subject Tests: Math II (750, retaking), Physics (October 2016), Literature (October 2016)
PSAT (new) : 1480 (730 M, 750 CR/WR)
AP: Took 1 class, but 5 tests so far: AP European History (5), AP World History (5), AP English Lit & Comp (5), AP English Lang & Comp (5), Microeconomics (5)
Senior Classes:
AP Mandarin
AP Calculus BC
AP Physics (covers material for 1 & 2 tests)
US History
Accelerated British Literature
Select Choral Group
Genocide (1st sem, religion requirement)
*AP Macro doesn’t fit into my schedule but I will be taking the test.
AWARDS
AP Scholar w/ Distinction
National Chinese & English Honor Society
Best Witness (MT), 2x consecutively in competition
Cum Laude (top 10% of class academically)
National Merit Scholar Semi-Finalist (assuming since I got 1480/1520; if not, I will put 2nd place in Public Speaking at the FBLA regional level)
EXTRACURRICULARS
- A Capella Group Co-President (member 9-12, president 12)
- PMEA All-State Vocalist (11) (Ranked 4th in the Philadelphia area for Tenor) - Ranked 12th as a sophomore
- 1st Team Mock Trial Expert Witness (10-12) / Mock Trial Board Member (12)
- Winter Track Co-Captain (12), Varsity Spring Track (9-10) - 6 Varsity Letters total
- Paid internship @ the fastest-growing business in the Philadelphia area (according to Inc 5000)
Job Description: conducted interviews resulting in 25+ freelancer hires, researched competitors, received calls from clients (summer before 12th) - Studied in China for a 3 week foreign exchange program; lived with a Chinese host family, attended poetry, physics, and chemistry classes that were conducted entirely in Mandarin (summer before 11th)
- Theatre Board (Theatre student leaders; run rehearsals, & volunteer to help middle school theatre program) (11-12)
- Ran a fundraiser in my backyard for the local theatre; 20+ acts including a former broadway star, raised $2,700; 6 week unpaid internship there that summer as well (summer before 10th)
- Founded a club that travels to Philly once a month, jams out on the streets, and hands out flyers for a charity that gives underprivileged kids music classes (late 11 through 12)
- Don’t know if I should include this Built, configured, & marketed a medium-sized multiplayer Minecraft server; profited $4,250 in two months selling virtual items; averaged 40 players online at once (summer before 10th)
ESSAYS/RECOMMENDATIONS
Common App Essay - pretty strong, chose the learning from failure option. I tried to organize an open-mic style fundraiser but procrastinated and was too scared of failing/being judged to make it work. Talked about what I learned and how I have applied that knowledge in my future endeavors.
Rec #1 - AP Euro teacher. She’s loved me since she watched me in the musicals in MS. Got an A+ in the class, never slacked off, always answered questions even if I was unsure. Apparently, she approached my GC & ranted (positively) about me for 30 minutes. Expecting 10/10 rec.
Rec #2 - Lit teacher. Didn’t participate much in class, but judging from her comments on my essays, she considers me super smart & interesting. Also writes 40+ recs per year and loves doing it, and writes so eloquently that it sort of hurts inside. I think it will be an 8/10 rec.
Additional Rec - 2 choices:
My immediate superior @ the language services company from this summer. She really likes me & was amazed at how much work I could manage, but is really busy and has only known me 2 months. I think it will be around a 7/10 rec.
OR
The executive director of the local theater I acted at/fundraised for/interned at. It isn’t “about me” but it would certainly shed some more light on how much work the event took (he talks about me calling him up with the idea, organizing & running meetings, contacting potential performers, etc.). It is only around 150 words long.
ADDITIONAL INFO
Instead of submitting an official resume to schools that allow a resume, can I send in my professional acting resume? I’ve done 15+ shows outside of school, but the vast majority were before high school. In 5th grade, I starred in a show at one of the largest theatres in Philadelphia, so I do think it would be worthwhile to submit it if I can.
I also may consider an arts supplement, either of me singing choir songs a capella or performing original songs on my acoustic guitar & singing (it’s a hobby of mine). Would this make any sense?
In terms of matches/safeties, I’m also thinking Oberlin, Wake Forest, & Vassar College. If you have any other suggestions please let me know!
