Should I Mention Home Life in Additional Info Section?

<p>This is my first time posting, though I’ve lurked for a while.</p>

<p>I’m applying to some top schools with an unweighted GPA of 3.70 and a weighted GPA of 4.56. My AP, SAT, and SAT Subject Test scores are all within range for these schools, but I’m aware my unweighted GPA is low. This is largely due to a pretty bad home life. Should I use the “Additional Info” section of the CA to explain this? Here is the message I’m considering:</p>

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<p>Firstly, my high school did not offer an AP French class, which I would been glad to take. I am very fond of the language and culture, and intend to continue my studies in college.</p>

<p>More importantly, I would like to address something not mentioned elsewhere in my application. My home life, and particularly my relationship with my brother, has been a significant source of stress in my life.</p>

<p>A poor home life produces intangible stressors that cause tangible results. My unweighted GPA is, frankly, marginally incongruous with my weighted GPA and standardized testing scores.</p>

<p>I ask that you take this into consideration when evaluating my GPA, which, although not poor by any measure, does not reflect the full extent of my capabilities.</p>

<p>I understand that the system fails if any candidate can “explain away” portions of their application, and fully accept responsibility for every part of mine. My intention is merely to provide insight.</p>

<p>I reveal this in the interest of full disclosure, so that my challenges and achievements may be accurately evaluated by the admissions committee, especially with respect to holistic review policies.</p>

<p>Please do not hesitate to contact me with any questions. </p>

<p>Thank you.</p>

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<p>Any advice would be appreciated!</p>

<p>Comments in <> below.</p>

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<p>More importantly, I would like to address something not mentioned elsewhere in my application. My home life, and particularly my relationship with my brother, has been a significant source of stress in my life. <this tells="" me="" nothing.="" is="" your="" brother="" a="" bully?="" criminal?="" handicapped?="" has="" had="" serious="" illnesses="" that="" take="" resources="" from="" family?="" responsibility="" because="" parents="" aren’t="" around="" or="" have="" their="" own="" issues?="" eats="" homework?=""></this></p>

<p>A poor home life produces intangible stressors that cause tangible results. My unweighted GPA is, frankly, marginally incongruous with my weighted GPA and standardized testing scores.</p>

<p>I ask that you take this into consideration when evaluating my GPA, which, although not poor by any measure, does not reflect the full extent of my capabilities.</p>

<p>I understand that the system fails if any candidate can “explain away” portions of their application, and fully accept responsibility for every part of mine. My intention is merely to provide insight.</p>

<p>I reveal this in the interest of full disclosure, so that my challenges and achievements may be accurately evaluated by the admissions committee, especially with respect to holistic review policies.</p>

<p>Please do not hesitate to contact me with any questions. </p>

<p>Thank you.</p>

<p><In general… this comes across as making excuses with no “meat” behind it. If you truly have a family issue that should be considered by the colleges – illness or parents who have not taken care of their responsibilities and there is some proof of this), then ask your guidance counselor to include this information in their reference. As this statement stands I think it would not help your application at all</p>

<p>Also, note that a 3.7 GPA isn’t terrible. My kid (no hook) got into U of Chicago, Swarthmore, and Harvey Mudd with an unweighted 3.7 last year. If the rest of your application is strong, you still have a shot. I suspect that 3.7 is sort of a cutoff – below that and colleges don’t think you can do the work. Above that, and you can stay in the possible admit pile while they review the rest of your application.></p>