<p>For my online class, we have to write a introduction. It asks what i dislike about writing. Whould it be bad to say “I feel that I dont write well because I have never really had a teacher that took the time to teach the correct way or critique my writings.” ?</p>
<p>It’s a bit blunt and transfers blame - neither of which are ever a good thing. Is there perhaps a more subtle approach you could take, such as “I feel I don’t write well but I am not sure where exactly I need to improve and am frustrated by this”? I think if you keep it focused on you and your desire to improve, it will be better.</p>
<p>“I hate writing about writing.” Simple and effective.</p>
<p>From you post,I get the feeling that your writing skill is pretty good. The only problem is that you don’t enjoy it.</p>
<p>Ohhh my writing is HORRIBLE. I really hate the introductions in online classes because you have to be really careful about your writing because its all they know of you.</p>
<p>BTW, we have to respond to some other people and almost everyone is like “Hi i’m a single mother of two and I’m returning to college…”<br>
I just don’t know what to say to it because I hate to be like “hey i’m glad you chose to go back to college. It must be really hard to be able to juggle a full time job, kids, and college. I really admire you for doing it” because I’d just kinda feel like I was talking to a little kid and like talking down on them. You know?</p>
<p>that wouldn’t sound like a little kid, i think they would feel gratified someone else appreciates the difficulty of what they’re doing. go for it!</p>