Should I send this email about USC being my top choice?

According to Joe Beltran of USC, I should let the office know if USC is my top choice. Does this email sound ok or does it sound like I’m begging for money lmao. Should I add anything?

Dear USC Admissions:

My name is ____, and my application ID is ____. I would just like to let the admissions office know that USC is my first choice, and I will definitely commit if I can afford to attend.

Thank you so much for your time and consideration.


Thank you all for your input!!