For the “Someone who had a significant influence on you” essay do u think it would be a good idea to write about my father. He immigrated to America from Turkey in 1970. He had a medical degree and completed his residency here having little/no money. He didnt know the language well but he worked hard to learn it. Today he is a successfuly doctor and chief pathologist at his hospital. Can i talk about how through his experiences i have learned how you must make goals and work towards them and that right now i am working towards goals of my own.
what do you think?