Smart and creative people- help me write a BEAUTIFUL sentence!!!!!

College Essays
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<p>I’m writing my college essay and I need help creating a pivotal point in my paper. It’s about stressing over my fear of flying after a summer in wyoming and i’m at the moment where I somewhat overcome this fear (i fully overcome it on the flight home).</p>

<p>This is what I have: "After what seemed like an eternity of non-stop worrying and panic, my mind eventually returned to reality after taking a scenic hike through Grand Teton National Park. As I looked up at the mountain covered in the setting sun’s pink and orange glow, I realized how I had wasted the last two weeks stressing over an irrational fear. "</p>

<p>The last sentence is the one I want to make BEAUTIFUL. I can’t do it though… it needs to be extremely descriptive and give the reader a picture of what is happening in an amazing way. HELP PLEASE I LOVE YOU ALL</p>

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<p>“The mighty aura of the sun-soaked mountain granted me the power to finally scoff in the face of my irrational fear.”</p>

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<p>@above
The sentence seems redunant and if you type that on google, it’s on there. Seems like plagarism to me.</p>

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<p>^Uhh what are you talking about? I made that up when I entered this thread. And I don’t see it anywhere on google…</p>

<p>[Let</a> me google that for you](<a href=“LMGTFY - Let Me Google That For You”>LMGTFY - Let Me Google That For You)</p>

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<p>Your mind goes on scenic hikes? Neat!</p>