<p>So I took up all 2 pages… completely</p>
<p>BUT… I think I went off topic</p>
<p>I changed outdoors to just spending time outside the office and such…+ enjoying nature and what it has to offer</p>
<p>and I titled a book wrong</p>
<p>Wrote the title of an overused book (so the reader will know it’s wrong :/) and talked about another book… haha</p>
<p>first paragraph wasn’t sort of what the prompt was asking for… a little bit, weak but fits the thesis perfectly 
i manipulated the thesis to my liking haha</p>
<p>second paragraph fit the prompt perfectly… </p>
<p>I’m scared because… I need at least a 10 to get that 800 :)</p>
<p>thanks!</p>