so that phase

<p>which one is more correct?

  1. Clara Barton ministered to soldiers on the battlefields; at Antietam, she was so close to the actual fighting that a bullet piereced her clieve.
  2. Clara Barton ministered to soldiers on the battlefields; she was at Antietam so close to the actual fighting so that a bullet pierced her sleeve. </p>

<p>P.S. Can you explain about so that phase? Can it be correct to use “so that” in SAT problems?</p>

<p>the first one is correct .
the so-that phase is correctly used , and is used for 1 time . blablabla–so-that
the second one contains a redundant so-that . if you noticed : blablabla;she was at Antietam so close to the actual fighting so that a bullet . the so-that phase is repeated. so-so that . it should be so-that .</p>