Some Advice on My CommonApp Essay

<p>anyone wanna read and give me some feedback on my essay?</p>

<p>it’s the person who influenced me topic. i wrote about my cousin who is the same age as me but has a deletion on chromosome 22 and lives in a pretty poor household</p>

<p>ill look at it :)</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to!</p>