<p>I think I did not do really well on my 2 short response and essay. However, it has the potential to be improved. Is anyone interested performing magic on my Brown’s writing? Thx a million. (Prefered not 09 Browns applicants)</p>
<p>bump char10</p>
<p>Anyone?..plz</p>
<p>i won’t edit it but i’ll give you feedback. a non-brown 09er, PM it to me.</p>
<p>sent’'… i just need feedbacks thx</p>
<p>Bump bump…need help…</p>
<p>Send it over!!</p>
<p>Feel free to send it over. :]</p>
<p>Feel free to send it…I’m 09 but I promise I have no intention of applying to Brown! :D</p>
<p>all sent’…</p>
<p>I’ll give you feedback, to the best of my ability.</p>
<p>send it to me i will feedback you it</p>
<p>No magic in writing. Just imagination and hardwork in drafting, redfrafting… etc.</p>
<p>seems like my essay are too jumpy and the transition doesnt work really well. i need to focus on that.</p>
<p>hey, i’d like to read it :)</p>
<p>Yeah send it over, i’ll comment :)</p>
<p>I would love to read it.</p>
<p>i’ll critique :D</p>
<p>im 09 but i’ll give u some feedback. dunno if it’ll help though</p>