Some supp essays, really need your help!

<p>I am an international student from Vietnam and I am really struggled to write these essays:
1 supp for Amherst, 1 for Colgate, 2 why essay for Hamilton and Vassar.(The deadline is coming :frowning: )</p>

<p>I will appreciate if you can give feedback on all the essays. However, it is still very nice of you to comment on only one. Tell me your contact and which essays you want to take a look at and I will send them to you.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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