<p>What the title says. The essay is, so far, 454 words, so I can probably add a couple things, if needed.</p>
<p>Going into physics (as of now, anyway).</p>
<p>What if I say that I will read and critique essays for whoever does the same for me? </p>
<p>I think the main flaw with mine is not drawing the reader in enough. I do well enough the first paragraph, but since I go into details after that, I lose some of the “personal” feeling to it…</p>
<p>What if I say that there’s candy in the essay?</p>
<p>I’ll read yours if you’ll read mine. PM it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it if I get candy!</p>