Someone, preferably already in college, read my essay!

<p>Hey fellow CCers,</p>

<p>Well i finished writing one of my Common Application essays. I would prefer that someone who is already in college reads it… or someone who is not applying this admissions cycle… but i would not mind THAT much to have it proofread by anyone who wants.</p>

<p>Tell me if you want to read the essay or not. I am looking for constructive criticism and how you think it is, overall…</p>

<p>Any takers?</p>

<p>PS: i already posted on the College Essay section but no one answered</p>

<p>bump …</p>