Someone willing to look over my essay?

<p>I plan on transferring over to UCLA. For those of you who know about UCLA admission, you will know that all UCs require 3 essays, with one being the 600 words long.</p>

<p>I can work on the two 200 essays, but with the 3rd one, I think it is the most important out of the three and needs special attention. I’ve completed it, and i cut off every unneeded part, and was able to cut it down to 630 words.</p>

<p>Can some experienced editor/reviewer be kind enough to spare some of their time to go over my essay and write some critic/comments on it? And I will appreciate if you could help me cut it down to 600 word limit.</p>

<p>Thnx a bunch!</p>

<p>please? anyone?</p>