<p>I’m in need of some serious critique for my personal essay. I’m planning on applying to a dozen private schools and some in-state schools. I think I have a somewhat unique situation and I want to see to it that my essay accurately reflects that.</p>
<p>Basically, I want to know, would you think I’m an interesting person if you read my essay? Would you want to know more about me?</p>
<p>I appreciate all who take their time to help me out.</p>