<p>Song to a Lost Friend</p>
<p>The darkness looms, bleakness blinding.<br>
Struggling, I breathe and breathe, choking,<br>
Finding no breath, I suffocate.<br>
Staring without hope, I look at<br>
Desolation, my fatal death.</p>
<p>This is my cry to you for help,
Only you, only you, help me.
Please come back my vanished friend.
Please rescue me from this shadow.
Take me in your arms and kiss me.</p>
<p>Did you write that yourself? I hope your friend is alright…</p>
<p>friend is alright. I’m not.
I guess I ddin’t get that point across. lol</p>
<p>Awww…Do you want to tell me what’s wrong?..Now I hope YOU’RE ok…</p>
<p>Those are lyrics, not a song. That said, I feel indifferent towards them.</p>
<p>ummm…i wrote it…and it’s not supposed to be lyrics?</p>
<p>would u say the same for TS Eliot’s “Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”. Yeah, tell him those are lyrics. lol</p>
<p>what about the “Songs of Soloman”? are those lyrics too? lol</p>
<p>I would tell TS Eliot that he wrote a lot ****… I’m cheeky like that.</p>
<p>I checked dictionary.com and it appears you are right. How frustrating!</p>
<p>The one question I’d have is why would you post it on CC?</p>
<p>Great question…</p>
<p>I should say, before cherrybarry replies, that I don’t mean any sort of offense by my previous post. It was more curiosity than anything else.</p>
<p>idk…it takes some insanity to write something that depressing…so i guess that explains it</p>
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<p>Noooo! I loved Prufrock!</p>
<p>I can understand the insanity driving you to write it, but what drove you to “publish” it on CC?</p>
<p>attention, obviously?
hehe, i’m not trying to be offensive, but hey, everybody loves attention.</p>
<p>the poem in itself wasn’t that capturing…or maybe i just don’t get attached easily. well, whatever, i hope you feel better.</p>
<p>Ay Shakespeare, go get a room.</p>
<p>It’s got a nice beat, I could dance to it.</p>