SOS Help!!! Who can help me with my essay?

<p>The Common app essay finished for RD…
but I really need someone else to help me improve it, I live outside America and my school doesn’t have a counselor.
I do hope somebody can help me with wording…and gimme more advice</p>

<p>Plz PM me if u can read my essay!</p>

<p>Thanks a lot!!!</p>

<p>Ill help! I talked to a ton of counselors and admission officers about how to write a successful common app supplement, so I know a few things. Plus writing/grammar is my strong suit. Obviously it’d be better if you got a counselor’s advice, but I can email you a former admissions essay grader who voluntarily reads and critiques essays for free.</p>

<p>thx if u can help!</p>