SPS Essay slip up

AHHHHHHHH! I was just reading back over my “Why SPS?” essay and realized that I said I would ‘contribute to the swim team’ but I just found out they don’t have one. SPS is my first choice, so now I’m nervous they’re going to think that I won’t go there because they don’t have swimming or that I didn’t do my research. I don’t know how I missed this, and honestly I don’t care that much about swimming but I’ve done it for a while. I just assumed they had a team because everywhere else I’m applying does. (Ugh even the underfunded schools where I’m from have them). They also have a pool, which is kind of misleading. Also, I got a special interest rec from my swim coach. How bad is this? I’m kind of freaking out. It was just one line in my essay, and I think my interview went extremely well. Will I be rejected because of this?

You could always email the AO and ask about starting a swim team and mention that you would love to start that program. Since they already have a pool, you assumed they had a team, however because they do not it is something you would love to bring to SPS! Even if they tell you starting a team is not an option at least you will look motivated and ready to contribute to the school community!

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Also I wanted to add I think your special interest rec from your swim coach is probably okay because they also know you as a person and how you preform under pressure.

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A bit off the topic, but related to SPS. It seems that SPS admissions are not willing to reply emails. I emailed them three times, and got one AUTO reply only. I know the AOs from ALL schools are much busy at this moment, and some may reply in 3-5 days, which is fine to me. But no reply from SPS for either asking for checklist or emailling addtional documents. I am not sure this was only for me or others experienced this too. Btw, they don’t have an admission portal for checklist. Is this correct?

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Didn’t your interviewer show you their website’s exclusive online chat mode? You could always send a quick text to any one of the AO’s, and even reach out to one of the students at SPS.

Totally off-topic. That’s called hijacking and violates Terms of Service as well as being considered rude to the OP. It’s better to start a new thread instead.

You’re not hijacking anything lol, and I don’t think you’re being rude. I believe you can contact SPS teachers and students through the link I pasted below. Actually, your post reminded me that this is an option, so thanks. And thank you @jpmorganchase21 for bringing it up as well.

https://www.sps.edu/admission/chat-with-our-students

@jpmorganchase21 @reknihtrevo Thank you both for pointing out such an option of contacting school. Didn’t know it. I will definitely give a try there.

Glad that everyone sees replies in a positive way. Just a casual reply. Good luck to you!

Hopefully SPS has an intramural swim team.

During an interview a few years ago an applicant expressed interest in joining the swim team at a New York boarding school only to be told that the school did not even have a swimming pool. At least SPS has a swimming pool.

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