Stanford Supplement essays

<p>Hey guys, can you critique my supplement essay? The prompt is: What matters to you, and why? I’m not sure if I made it personal enough or representative of me as a lover of animals. I’d like to know what gist of my character this essay reveals about me from a stranger’s point of view. Let me know if you want to read it and I will PM you.</p>

<p>Thank you :)</p>

<p>Sure pm it over.</p>

<p>thanks I sent it over. I hope it worked; my internet is a little slow.</p>

<p>I’d love to read it, if you’d like a second opinion. :)</p>

<p>yeah sure I’ll read it</p>

<p>i would love to read it! </p>

<p>This is from 2013. The OP is long gone. Let this thread go to the archives. </p>