<p>Hey really short notice but i just finished my Why Stanford is Right for you essay and need some people to look over it for me. I have some run on sentences but can’t think of how to cut them down. </p>
<p>Stanford is one of the Worlds leading research and teaching institutions, a fact that not many Universities can call their own. Pair this with a beautiful campus, vacation like weather, and a heart of extremely active intellectuals and it is no wonder to me that Stanford has remained my dream school since I experienced the Winds of Freedom myself while touring the campus at the young age of 14. Not only do I believe that a Stanford education will prepare me for a successful and prosperous future I feel that with the combination of challenging academics, a undergrad-oriented faculty composed of Nobel and Pulitzer Prize winning professors, and a diverse campus environment and student body, my four years spent at Stanford will be nothing short of one of the most mind opening and enjoyable experiences of my life. I trust that Stanford will enable me to discover my passion and give me the tools and resources to succeed with that passion and make a difference. However, Stanford has found a home at the top of my college list for reasons other than its academic promises. Sustainable Stanford has captivated me with its environmental achievements and going green efforts, something that I am also very passionate about. Stanfords Bing Overseas Student Study Program and the volunteer and internship work available through this program is another opportunity I look forward to taking full advantage of. Rather it be participating in Stanfords Structured Liberal Education class, exploring Silicon Valley or pulling an all nighter before an exam I feel that Stanford is the place for me. I am capable and ready to work hard and just as eager to give back to the Stanford Community as I am to absorb the ideas and ideals that Stanford has to offer me.</p>