<p>would this be okay to include in my essay</p>
<p>One day I would like to make a huge impact on underprivileged girls. I want to travel to under developing countries to educate, and better young girls lives. I would enjoy giving back to people who really deserve it. My dream is to one day build a school in Africa with the highest education possible just for girls. Attending Stern would enable me to live my dream. Thank you for your time, and for reading my essay.</p>
<p>thats the end of my essay</p>