<p>is it okay that my update letter isn't written beautifully?
it mentions why i still love their school, and updates them on accomplishments.
however, the accomplishments part seems kind of awkward. they're just one sentence, unrelated things.
it seems kind of choppy to me and i was wondering if this was okay?
is it also possible that i list my accomplishments in bullet point form instead?</p>
<p>thanks for the advice!</p>