"Story central to my identity" topic, is this topic okay?

<p>I’m planning to write that his did certain extra curriculars I.e. MUNs and Parliamentary debating change me as a person. How it had an effect on my personality and attitude. Is it okay? Or too cliched? </p>

<p>You need depth and details. Nothing is cliched if you can make it real, convincing, and representative of your character. But think long and hard. How has it changed your character? Have the changes all been good? Etc…</p>

<p>It has changed me drastically, helped me with my social anxiety, sent sensitized me to grave international issues, it the very reason I want to choose the major I’m choosing, and a lot of other changes in the person who I am. </p>