Stranded in an Airport - Common App Essay

<p>My essay needs some work. It’s a bit too long and i feel like it’s missing something. Any advice is appreciated. </p>

<p>It’s about my day stranded in the airport after my flight was canceleld, while on my way to Barcelona to study abroad.</p>

<p>PM me!</p>

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