Stuck on last sentence!

Any tips on how to conclude an essay with a strong “hook”? How NOT to conclude an essay? I have 15 words leftover.

’ Please — just, like, accept me? I wanna make my mother proud. ’

@saintgermain You still have four words leftover. I am sure you could still make it sound a bit more desperate.

I changed my essay up a bit, and finally finished the last sentence. I love it.