Sublime or Subpar Common App Essay

<p>It’s the “Topic of Your Choice” essay.</p>

<p>I really need some advice! It’s almost a final draft.</p>

<p>I am applying to the top tier schools, I would appreciate it if students who got into top tier schools would look over it!</p>

<p>Or any other person with a critical mind :]</p>

<p>Post here or PM me!</p>

<p>PM with prompt/title if applicable.</p>

<p>Sent as a PM.</p>