Supplement for Stanford. Help a brotha out.

<p>Stanford students are widely known to possess a sense of intellectual vitality. Tell us about an idea or an experience you have had that you find intellectually engaging.</p>

<p>During my freshman year, my home life imploded. The family I’d once held so dear had fallen apart in a matter of days, and there was nothing I could do about it. Family dinners vanished, and I found myself spending a lot of time alone with my thoughts. I was bombarded with emotions that my yet young brain could not comprehend, emotions for which I had no outlet. I was confused. Then I saw Garden State. As I watched Andrew Largeman, disillusioned and numbed by the collapse of his family, struggle to lead a normal life, I felt as if my own story were unfolding before me. The script captured a man without direction: his actions were robotic, his words passionless. I was staring into my future. But as the story wore on, Large came to grips with his life and realized that sulking wasn’t going to change anything. He needed to take initiative. This philosophy resonated with me: I knew I needed to make amends before my life became the one on the screen. However, the movie itself helped me realize something else, something much broader. I knew I wanted to be a filmmaker. Moreover, I want to tell stories that provoke people into examining their lives. I want to jar people from their comfort zones. I want to do for other people what Garden State did for me. And even if I can only change one person, I’ll have made a difference I can be proud of.</p>

<p>A handy 249 words (limit’s 250).</p>

<p>Good. Don’t change it, and edit it off this post before the time limit is up.</p>

<p>…this is a pretty dumb question, but how would i go about doing that?</p>

<p>Time limit is probably up.</p>

<p>I thought it was pretty good, provokes emotion. Might mix in a few more “gut-wrenching” type words to really describe your feelings throughout the piece limit allowing.</p>

<p>Do you think it effectively answers the question? It’s supposed to be about an intellectually engaging experience, and two or three people that have read it so far don’t think it fits the prompt.</p>

<p>I like the essay overall. I think it meets the prompt but I am not sure if the family life imploding = divorce or just no more family dinners. I haven’t seen “Garden State” so I can’t make the comparison that way. Also referring to Largeman as “Large” might seem awkward for someone who hasn’t seen the movie. Also: “make amends” for what? You compared taking the initiative to avoid sulking to making amends for some unknown wrongs. Just my two cents.</p>