<p>I’ve been getting together my RD applications and have consequently had to write a few more essays. I have one supplemental essay that I am not so sure on, and would like for someone to read it. It’s a ‘what influenced you to apply to [school] and why [school]?’ kind of essay, and while I think I have a solid idea and foundation for my essay, something about is just screaming ‘unpolished’ to me. </p>
<p>Anyways, would anyone be willing to read/critique/help ‘polish’ my essay? It’s less than 500 words, so hopefully it won’t be too big of an undertaking for you (time wise).</p>