<p>I think I’m finally starting to get somewhere with this essay, and I’d really appreciate it if someone could take a look at it and give some feedback.</p>
<p>Hey I would be really interested to read it and share my opinions. I’m also applying for LACs but mostly not as highly ranged as Swat.</p>
<p>I ended up submitting the application after having some other people look over it, thanks for your willingness to help though</p>