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College Essays
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<p>Who’s willing to read my short essay for CommonApp? I’ll need lots of help and probably revision because I’m not an expert writer, especially when it comes to essays. Thanks in advance!</p>

2

<p>Anyone willing?</p>

3

<p>Bump (10 chars)</p>

4

<p>what’s it about?</p>

5

<p>I’ll take a look at it. Getting it down to 150 words is kinda hard. I’ll help.</p>

6

<p>I’d love to help you</p>

7

<p>Ill look…</p>

8

<p>does anyone know if it has to be exactly 150 words?</p>

9

<p>No, it can go over a little bit. They won’t sit and count the words, but don’t make it 10 pages long.</p>