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You should edit ASAP. Go here: [College</a> Essays - College Confidential](<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/]College”>College Essays - College Confidential Forums) and ask people to proofread your essay by PM, and only PM to posters who have at least 10 posts (to prevent folks register nicknames to copy your essay).</p>
<p>I don’t think a 3.75 is sufficient enough for Haas though, even for BizEcon at LA may be a reach. Don’t know, just my 2 cents :)</p>