I appreciate my teachers feedback, but I am still lost on the essay that I wrote about The Stranger. Would any of you guys help me by giving me some suggestions and feedback?
Have you already submitted the app? If so there’s no point in worrying. And not all teachers know what it is when they are doing when it comes to Application essays, so take his/her advice with a grain of salt.
Yeah, my teacher tried to “fix” my Common App essay once and totally mutilated it. Teachers have a tendency to erase the student’s “voice” and take out critical information because they are not as familiar with the subject as the student who wrote it.
Is this an essay for a college app? If so and the application’s already been submitted, there’s not much you can do about it.
The Stranger? Is this a college essay or an essay for English class? I’ve read the book so I’d be happy to read your essay.