Telluride Association Summer Program ( TASP ) 2008

<p>Porna is going too kill her husband and suck his blood.</p>

<p>And what’s up with your essays? You’ll have to send them by copying and pasting into the email.</p>

<p>****! I sent her my essay already. :P</p>

<p>I don’t feel like reading more than 2 essays par personne. Onto #3!</p>

<p>Well, her essay wasn’t good. I, unlike everyone who succeeds in life, actually say what I think. That’s why I suck at life.</p>

<p>omg…
10char</p>

<p>wink, check out the names i made up for you! i edited the post. post #4715</p>

<p>YES! mls understood the tenchar notation! woot!
ok, bad timing on that… <em>furry elmo hug</em></p>

<p>There’s a difference between honest criticism and being an a-s-s.</p>

<p>porna now would a great time for an apology and some cooldown fluid and cyber-hugs.</p>

<p>Wink da link…my nerdy “bling” consists solely of my various science olympiad medals…;)</p>

<p>Damn! I was supposed to go to sleep…</p>

<p>read my essay don, that’ll put ya to sleep :)</p>

<p>Panic’s Ayiti Cheri thingy:

  1. What TASP topic is this essay for? I’m flabbergasted.
  2. GRAMMAR. PUNCTUATION. <em>head-desk. head-desk. head-desk</em>
  3. “hopes and aspirations put into being” is both redundant and awkward.
  4. Better than the other one.
  5. You have none to very little sense of the rhythms of a sentence.
  6. Last sentence reminds me of a song lyric. Again, abuse of commas.</p>

<p>I plan on saying exactly what I think. I’m not a coddler; I give actual criticisms, and I admit that I’m trained to only look for the negatives. Onto whoever Megan is!</p>

<p>Anyone who mentions charlamagne and ayn rand in the same essay is pretty cool in my books. (:</p>

<p>Christ, porna, we weren’t kidding. This is a public forum. There is no reason for you to tell us all of that. It’s between you and the person that wrote the essay. If you want to criticise, than email them.</p>

<p>Oh God. I’m next.</p>

<p>fewer criticism this time, that’s a plus.</p>

<p>porna, easy on the “criticism”. and the successful people in life DO say what they think, but also know HOW to say it. u should at least give her the respect of PMing it to her. its a good thing that we already know each other sorta. i would have been humiliated</p>

<p>Has anyone read Wolf’s essays?
:P</p>

<p>My parents are yelling at me to go to bed…hopefully I can squeeze out a few more minutes…</p>

<p>No, they’re in a weird file extension, and my computer won’t open them. We should have her PM or just email the text around.</p>

<p>hmm… this night of discussion is ending on a rather bad note…</p>

<p>I’m waiting for the bomb to drop. She’s reading mine now.</p>

<p>i got some converter download for wolf’s papers.</p>