TEst essay preparation

Test Preparation
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<p>Okay so I am international student BUT I am studying VERY hard for the SAT! However, I am have some struggles with this essays - can community help me? </p>

<p>Its SO FRUSTRATING!! I h8h8h8h8</p>

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Dear ladies and GentleMen of the CollegeBoard founded in 1930 by Gaston Caperton to aid and promote high school students to provide standardized tests to promote intellectual aquitity, welcome, to my essay.</p>

<p>I bid you take a seat and enjoy my essays, [sic, added an extra s ]</p>

<p>First off, mistakes are bad. Imagine a world where people make mistakes. Imagine a world where the government is unable to not make mistakes. Imagine a world. Now stop imagining that world, because this world which exists is our world. Now, I ask of you, is this a good world? Is this a good world? “world is good?” as yoda would say. In the movie Star Wars. Yoda is a master who made mistakes. However, he was able to teach luke skywalker about his mistakes so in this case mistakes were good.
Secondly, mistakes are good because they help people. Picture the dog on the side of the street falling down while he is falling he will not fall again because he is learning. In addition, in the book “BFG by Roald Dahl” the BFG makes mistakes such as eating Chillean Beans, which are humans in disguise. However, he admits this mistake, and doesn’t eat humans but instead eats other things. It is very interesting book, I liked it.</p>

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<p>What question is this answering?</p>

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<p>IS common SAT prompt</p>

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<p>Is this all you were able to write in the time limit?</p>

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<p>loooll yeah it’s kinda short</p>

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<p>What’s the deal with the first 3 sentences? If you are considering them, I suggest you reconsider. Next, be more direct. The 3 sentences including “imagine” may be interesting stylistically, but they detract from your ability to prove your point. I recommend you start from scratch in this process. As the first step try reading - How to Get a 12 Essay in 10 Days. You can find it on this site. Good luck.</p>

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<p>Thanks, I have a question though, it’s good and beneficial to start with a set structure I am pretty sure. It’s a good strategy, have you guys heard of it?</p>