Test for You Essay Graders

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<p>I wrote this essay on the October SAT. My topic was something along the lines of “Do people’s actions, not their words, reveal their true intentions and attitudes?” </p>

<p>I would like you all to guess the score it was awarded, and then I’ll reveal the actual score. </p>

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<p>Please don’t look through my post history or any old threads. I’d like you to grade this essay as though I posted it on here from a practice test. </p>

<p>Also, this was my first time taking the SAT, and I was more nervous than I should’ve been. My use of Mean Girls as an example in my essay was due primarily to this.</p>

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<p>I don’t think you’ve got much of a thesis, but you stick to the simple 5 paragraph formula. I don’t have a problem with using Mean Girls as an example. Mathson used Star Trek’s “The needs of the many outweigh the needs of a few” on his essay a couple of years back. His essay was about the same length and equally illegible. He got a 9. So that’s my guess for you.</p>

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<p>almost 2 full pages, 3 examples, 5 paragraphs…id say a 6 out of 6</p>

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<p>id say a 10~
lack of SAT words , mispelled first word in the essay~ not too strong i guess</p>

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<p>I got an 11. I personally think my essay was horribly structured and I thought my examples were terrible. It didn’t flow at all and it was just overall really bad. It’s easily one of the worst things I’ve ever written. I was sure I’d get a 6 or 7.</p>